My first rap track. I need people to criticize it. by Tyrone Criss Lyrics
Https://soundcloud.com/tyronecriss/dirty-soxs
This is the first Hip-Hop track I've produced, in which I rap. It would be appreciated if you guise could listen and give me some constructive criticism on my Vocals, and Instrumentals. I'm a little insecure about my voice, I think it sounds Bill Gates type of white. It would be cool to know your perspective on how you felt when you heard my voice. I recorded the vocals with a Laptop Microphone, so I expect criticism about that right off the back. Thanks you, and I'll be active with responses. I'm always trying to get better
This is the first Hip-Hop track I've produced, in which I rap. It would be appreciated if you guise could listen and give me some constructive criticism on my Vocals, and Instrumentals. I'm a little insecure about my voice, I think it sounds Bill Gates type of white. It would be cool to know your perspective on how you felt when you heard my voice. I recorded the vocals with a Laptop Microphone, so I expect criticism about that right off the back. Thanks you, and I'll be active with responses. I'm always trying to get better